*****Sensual*******
My body shakes
as you pull me closer
Your eyes make me shiver
their icy blue piercing the darkness
Your touch soft, warm
Slowly calms me
as your hands tangle themselves in my hair
Your kiss, slow and passionate
lingers on my lips
My heart races
as you slowly lay me down
your hands warming my skin
Your voice is steady
as you say
theres no turning back
Your breathing becomes raged
as our bodies collide
you run your hands, slowly, deliberatley down my body
My body tences
Tight
with the oragasm of your touch
A contest entry
- Taste of Romance by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
475 points, ended July 23, 2008, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Touch me with your words. by Ho74pp1eP1e.
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Comments
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Lovely, very lovely. It has just enough sensual to grab you, but is tasteful. Good luck.
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This is beautiful, you did a great job describing how he makes you feel. Thank you for entering my contest, keep up the great work!
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Sensually beautiful
Your breathing becomes raged
as our bodies collide
you run your hands, slowly, deliberatley down my body a wonderful stanza
Thank you for your entry and best wishes
Julie
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Your touch soft, warm Slowly calms me as our bodies collide you run your hands, slowly, deliberatley down my body My body tences Tight with the oragasm of your touch
wonderful poem full of captivating passion all the way through good luck in the contest
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