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Sometimes Its Too Late

If I could recapture
the innocence of our first touch.
This would mean everything.
It just would mean so much.

If I could step back into
our former, wistful glee.
Where we had no reserves
unhindered totally.

This place in time
would be priceless to me.
And, this time
I would hold it with intensity.

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  • Angelflower
    July 23, 2008

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    I really liked this.. There was a lot of emotion in this.. A lot of love and hope as well. You did a wonderful job with the prompt..Thank you very much for sharing.. best of luck..

    Angel