Memories remain
when all is gone.
Nothing to take for granted,
when everything is withdrawn.
I see you fading away
with my heart in your hands.
Don’t forget the times we had
or we’ll never make it to the end.
Author notes
exactly 40 words
prompt: picture 1
i wrote this a while back but couldnt figure out how to continue it.. and it fits your contest sooo i decided to enter
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A contest entry
- Early Morning Dark Quickie!!! by Sweet Impatience.
900 points, ended July 18, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i love your take on the prompt.
very well penned. -
I see you fading away
with my heart in your hands.
wow inTENSE image.
seriously -
aw i like the last line..
because that means the poem is over..
LMAO JOKING.
i just rly like that line. -
this most definitely fits the picture I agree. these lines are the ones that stood out to me the most:
when all is gone.
Nothing to take for granted,
excellent..
good luck
kat
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2nd and 3rd line were so poignant! Really think this write works well for the pic!
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