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Life

Life is a circle
of ends
and then
leaves ripples of you

A contest entry

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  • Hello...No.One.Home silver member
    July 18, 2008

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    Awww... this is so sweet yet so true.

    Amazing and I wish you all the luck for this contest.

    Rose


  • FifthDove
    July 17, 2008

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    For being a shorter poem then I am used to reading of yours I will say that is is just as good as them, love your poetry My poetman


  • Amera gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    How true and so profound! Life is a circle and yet nothing lasts forever. Well done!

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • MortalPhoenix
    July 17, 2008

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    This is very interesting, but shouldn't leave be leaves?
    Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!

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