I sit here in my room
looking at the snapshots of our special summer
Our little snippets of those sunshine filled months
Those few months where our sizzling love first started sparking
I remember how we would lay out and be snuggled up
everything would be silent...then you would say what you'd usually say
"there's nowhere on earth I'd rather be then right here with you"
In the sincere and soft way you said it i believed you
strange really how words with such simplicity
can be so powerful
Author notes
snapshots
special
snippets
sunshine
sizzling
sparking
snuggled
silent
sincere
soft
simplicity
A contest entry
- ~ Summer Word Bank ~ by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended July 27, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The last of my points.....for you!! by l33t-n1nj4.
747 points, ended August 15, 2008, 28 entries
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Comments
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heheh :]
you're pretty good.
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Its very pretty and I enjoyed it alot. To me tho it comes off as more of the start to a good story or book then a poem. Good JOb
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I love the scene you put the reader in here, letting us share in this special moment.
Well penned.
~lost
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simple words can have very profound and lasting meaning. Thanks for entering and best wishes
Frogz~ -
Simple words seem to hurt the most, you have driven this point home within your usage of the word bank,
Thanks for joining in,
Love and Light
Frozentearz
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