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Secluded Solitude

Such simplicity of sincere love,
Sparkling, through soft smiles,
Snuggled up to someone special,
Silent snippets of snapshots
Surround us, soothing
Sensational sizzling sunshine,
Soft golden sand, our
Secret secluded solitude






Author notes

Word bank used in this order
simplicity,
sincere,
Sparking,
soft,
snuggled,
special,
silent,
snippets,
Snapshots
Sizzling,
sunshine,
soft,

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  • iamlost gold member
    August 6, 2008

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    I like the alliteration, you stayed true to the wordbank with the way you arranged it and the words you gave it.
    Well penned.

    ~lost


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    This is just beautiful hun! Your writing is just awesome It almost is a Pleiades
    All the best with this.
    Gaylene


    • The Poetic Angel
      July 23, 2008
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      Thanks You mum

      lol yea it cuda been a pleides i dint think of doin that lol

      xxx Judie xxx


  • Frozentearz
    July 21, 2008

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    mmm this tells it tale
    makes one wonder about that secreat held, wonderful take on the wordbank.
    Blessings,
    Frozentearz


  • Frogzter gold member
    July 20, 2008

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    I agree that is is soft and sensual... brings a smile to the face of the reader. We all long for days like these.

    Frogz~


  • Blankscreen2222
    July 17, 2008

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    Ohhhhh this is so lovely. Sweet soft and sensual

    Best of luck in the contest.



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