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Maa

How to describe an indescribable light
that comes into your life, as a guide,
a friend, a mother, a poetess with
such awesome talent and a never-ending
source of inspiration for writing and
to those she has here on AP befriended?

I wish I had such talent to draw upon
metaphors and images so as to draw a
picture, a portrait of one so dear.
But she has moved on from AP to do
other things, maybe greater deeds-
I don't really know, but I miss her.

You really don't know what you've got
'til its gone; and I wish I could tell
her how much I appreciated her being there
for me, as I got started writing on AP.
I wish she'd visit more frequently -
souls like hers are hard to find.

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  • DeGraw
    July 27, 2008

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    How sweet!

    A nice tribute to a friend gone but never lost, always to remain in your heart!
    Best regards,
    Jennifer


  • MargaretG
    July 19, 2008

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    I have some friends missing from the ranks as well, we miss them. Marion is a special, wonderful woman, and you wrote a tender poem to her.


  • maa gold member
    July 18, 2008

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    oh sweetie, maa is not gone ...
    even if she only stops by from time to time, she is keeping in touch with you and all those other wonderful beings dear to her heart ...
    I thank you so much for your truly touching words that have moved me deep within ...
    I smiled at your bouquet of yellow roses, because I know the significance this color of flower has for you ...
    it is souls like you who make me feel welcome and useful on my humble path on earth ...

    I love you,
    marion


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    Maa was one of favorites,

    one of the most beautiful souls,

    her poetry is outstanding,

    you have complemented her well my friend,

    very lovely write

    God bless...