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He was...

He was my pipe
            my drug
                                    the flame

He was my killer
                        my addiction
            my life line

He was my everything
                                  my nothing
                                                    my dream

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  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 28, 2008

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    Wow i liked this i loved the way it was written so short and yet it has lots of emotion.
    ..<3..
    Shelly


  • torn dragonfly
    July 18, 2008
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    hm.
    This flows well.
    Like the setup of phrases.
    Hope all is well, sweetheart.