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Gleaming in the Streets

without love,
life is disfigured.
removing
the will
to continue

living

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  • Angelflower
    July 23, 2008

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    You did a wonderful job.. I really loved how short this is..Short yet it had impact to it I really enjoyed it.. thank you very much for sharing this.. best of luck..


    Angel


  • movedon
    July 17, 2008

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    Ok, I might need to retract my previous comment about the best short poem because this one really good as well. Love is what gives shape to life. No one is loved by everyone, but everyone is loved by someone. I like how you give the feeling of needing love in your life.


    I really love love LOVED the ending! I feel like you not only point out how important love is to life, but to actually keep on living. Superb write.

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • XRainbowliciousX
    July 17, 2008
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    Oh wow...this was really neat...short and good.