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I am.

I am the secret lover,
Filling your head with memories of sinful nights and stains on your bed,
I am the light,
Playing tricks with your head,
I am the day,
Following the night and killing your fun,
I am the teenage girl,
Getting ready to run,
I am the child,
Lost and hurt,
I am the victim,
Lying in the dirt,
I am the abuser,
Failing to care.

I am the reason,
You are to blame.

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You do my fucking head in, No more will I be your fucking angel.

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  • alexandra.
    July 17, 2008

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    Wow.

    Really brutal, really raw, really quite awesome.
    I love how you say
    "I am the victim,
    Lying in the dirt,
    I am the abuser,
    Failing to care."
    Really powerful,

    love it, tbh.

    The ending it just amazing, very strong.

    loves,
    xxx


  • DreamerOfTheStars
    July 17, 2008

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    dang Emily that's got some pretty raw emotion to It which makes me love it all the more Awesome job...