I rather the stem stain
than retain my energy
I rather the petal sway
than be happy today
I rather the color live
for just one moment
I exhale a breath
to blossom
what is sometimes
forgotten
Author notes
Visual Prompt #3
A contest entry
- Hello Writers by luna-midnight.
1000 points, ended August 3, 2008, 22 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow. this a little powerful piece of poetry. i loved it. gooooooood luck
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What a wonderfully gentle write... so creative to find such beauty in this prompt... Well done...
Ken
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awwww this is lovely, love the ending, i really liek the whole feel of the poem, great write and thanks for entering
good luck, stepahnie ♥
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