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~Raindrop's of Sorrow~

Sunflowers tainted by tastes of devastation.
Crimson speckles of pain,
disfigure natures perfection;
as sun drenched petals drip misery,
into empty holes of humanity.

Precious gifts stolen without conscious effort.
Erased slates, once full of hopeful possibilities,
now barren, a desert wasteland.
Turbulent skies of mixed emotions stir,
restlessly as raindrops of sorrow bleed upon despair.

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10 - 17 lines
Prompt: I_Never_Got_To_Say_Goodbye_by_Create_Destroy

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  • Angelflower
    July 23, 2008
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    I really loved this!! the image that you created went so well with the prompt!! You brought so much emotion out of the picture! you really brought it to life.. thank you very much for sharing this.. I really enjoyed reading it.. Best of luck..


    Angel


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 17, 2008

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    Your words breathe life into the picture--excellent take on the prompt11Great imagery within this piece--
    Best of Luck in the Contest! :