An eternal kiss
never was such as this
your lips gently caress mine
deepen our passion
get lost in the moment
An eternal kiss
never was such as this
pull me closer
I want to feel
your beating heart
lost in your embrace
An eternal kiss
never was such as this
pull away though I don't want to
time to get on with our lives
though I intend for many more
but the sun is setting now
An eternal kiss
never was such as this
our first kiss
so much passion it was bliss
Author notes
1- pic credit:An Eternal Kiss by ~MisterHip
A contest entry
- Hello Writers by luna-midnight.
1000 points, ended August 3, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Beautiful words here my dear friend. I really like that you repeat yourself through out the poem. Creative and a good write.
Warmest,
Mylee -
ths is a lovely thought to think upon
wonderful write and good luck
thanks for entering
stephanie ♥
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