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Without words.



 

 

 

 



in your eyes.

I felt you
taste me

the first time
we met.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Barry Hodges silver member
    August 25

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    Brief but very much to the point. Sort of a poetic "undressing with one's eyes". Yum yum yum yum. Sadly it never happened to me.


    • Blankscreen2222
      August 25
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      Dearest Barry,

      I do not believe for one moment that you have never experienced such an encounter as this. ;-) hehe.

      I hope you are well.


  • AraLupus
    March 12
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    Thanks for the entry, but it didn't really fit with the contest. Sorry


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    July 28, 2008
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    Good stuff!

    This is as intense as it gets.
    Good luck with the contest.

    Tom


  • Rclane gold member
    July 18, 2008
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    Thank you for your entry. It does go well with your prompt. All the best.


  • JustFallingApart
    July 17, 2008

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    very nice write. I got a messege saying this poem was entered into my contest and when I went to my contest it wasn't there. So I went to my notes and clicked on it to read it and thought maybe something was just off. I see you havn't entered, I appologize for this, just wanted to see if there was anything wrong with my contest.

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