Is there immortality in the hereafter?
I say yes, it's a gift by God as he
promises me of a new and fulfilled life.
Following his word and enduring
life's continuous strifes while bowing
down to his will to insure the blessings
of a glorious life...
I know God would be pleased, if I choose
right. Just to show that I listened he
would always help me out of any difficult
plights.
He protects me, guides me, and loves me
unconditionally because I am a child of
his and I will always believe in his word
and all he represents to me...
If that's immortality is then, I will continuous
do all I can to constantly rise and let my soul
become free...
Author notes
God means so much to me and have done so much. I hope that I have given all that I can and show this meager tribute for what he represents to me...
A contest entry
- Immortality... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 23, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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Ah..so much honesty in the words of this piece....well done ..and my thanks for entering such a wonderful entry ...
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Beautiful write DB as always full of passion for our dear Lord...uplifting bliss.
xxx Hilly
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I FEEL THE SAME,
I LOVE YOUR PASSION,
RISE AND LET MY SOUL BECOME FREE.
SO BEAUTIFUL
GOD BLESS...
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