holding onto my comfort bottle
lighting a match for my forgetting cigarette
let's pretend that you didn't push me against the wall
just then
i'll act like i didn't sleep with that guy from the club
last night
crushing every foundation that we build
time and time again
nothing works because neither of us can
handle the pressure of this passsion, crazy infatution
bleeding lust, turning blue from pain
>every kiss your lips give
send me in the rains of confusion
>burning up, burning up
burn...burn...burning up
our shattered souls
lay across our laps like winter blankets
a sad warmness
at night
radio crackles
'forget me nots' and lots of 'i'm sorry-please forgive me's
and all i can think of...
those ugly, true words you said
how dead i felt when yoru bags followed you out the door
how hollow i felt on that man's bed
while he enjoyed our fuck
how damaged shit just gets
and loves to get worse
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thats a good piecee!! lol i like the breakin' of mood at the end, tho it keeps u indirectly in the same dark mood!
thats a good piecee!
well doneee !!
me
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dude!!! i didnt know poeple were still reading my shit!! lol. thanks boo-youknow i forgot i had even written this? i was like 'shit...i must have been high when i posted this' cause i swear i dont recall posting it lol anyway...thanks for reading it.
xoxoxo
your hubby
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oooo i really like this!
i like all the metaphores in there *claps*
a very enjoyable read, tho im not sure the second to last stanza fits in with the rest of the poem.. or maybe its just me in the "safe" zone lol.
i like this poem possibly one of ur best.
keep it up =]
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hmmm..now that you mention it you are probably right. lol i might take that part out...lol i usually do end up editing songs again before im satisfied with somethign decent. thanks though! im not sure where it came from heehee *read above post!!!*
but...i dont know. it came from some freaky place. thanks a bunch though! im glad people are still reading.
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lol what were u on when u wrote that reply? must say i have never heard u use that language that much before
skittles?
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lmao i was on my other accout. and i didnt realize it until like..afterwards. so was like 'what the fuck'. and no thank you, skittles hurt me teeth now
xoxo
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