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Does Experience Count?

DOES EXPERIENCE COUNT?

a fine woman like you could have
any young stud she wanted
but doesn’t experience count
for something?

do you want fast and furious
or do you want slow and prime?
i can make it last baby girl
all night long

i’ll travel over your rounded hills
drive us both crazy teasing tasting
their sweet hard chocolate tips
until you moan for more

i want to savor your secret scent
taste all your assorted lady flavors
with a tongue made to give you
pure pleasure

do you want lips that leave
trails of fire over your satin skin
a man who can take you to the edge
again and again?

a lover who knows what you need
just by the smoldering look in your eyes
and the way your body moves
does experience count?

i hope it does because i want
a woman who knows what she wants
and is not afraid to just let me
give it to her

i’ll bring you red roses and steamy sex
hot enough to melt inhibitions
and the true devotion you deserve
from a seasoned man


DJA 7/17/08

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  • whispersoftly
    September 10, 2008

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    needing a cold shower.....

    erm this is HOT! sexy little write, you sound like the perfect man/lover the last stanza is my favourite though the whole poem is fantastic! i like this ALOT! thankyou for sharing! xx cheryl


  • hotchocolate gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    WOW this is good!
    i’ll travel over your rounded hills
    drive us both crazy teasing tasting
    their sweet hard chocolate tips
    until you moan for more