You saw me when
I felt unseen
You heard me when
I felt unheard
So it doesn't matter how far
away you are
I'll be there in a while
When I was unreachable
You were able to reach me
When I was unstoppable
You were able to stop me
So it doesn't matter how far
away you are
I'll be there in a while
You comforted me when
I was down
You held me when
I needed to be held
So it doesn't matter how far
away you are
I'll be there in a while
When I was unlovable
You were able to love me
You loved me when
I felt unloved
So it doesn't matter how far
away you are
I'll be there in a while
It doesn't matter how far
away you are
I'll be there in a while
To see you
To hear you
To reach you
To stop you
To comfort you
To hold you
To Love You…
A contest entry
- Taste of Romance by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
475 points, ended July 23, 2008, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very loving write. I think we all have someone like this in our lives!!!! My boyfriend is the only one who can see me when I feel invisible; which is why I love him so much
Lovely write
Warmest,
Mylee -
A sweet charming and heart felt poem you have written here.
When we feel unlovable we can still be loved and wanted, and no matter where they are the feelings never change
Thank you for your entry and best wishes
Julie
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It doesn't matter how far away you are I'll be there in a while To see you To hear you To reach you To stop you
To comfort you To hold you To Love You…wonderful poem full of strong emotions from the distanced heart all the way through god luck in the contest
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