The last dance
a precious time
One last kiss
Oh Sublime
Please don't fight it
just let go
Feel our bodies
sway to and fro
Lean on me
I'll hold you steady
Just let me know
when you're ready
It's time to change
partners now
It's time to dance
with angels in the clouds
Go on now
take her hand
I'm sure it will
be just grand
Love you Dear
see you soon
Be waiting for me
with some fine old tunes
I'm sure we'll dance
again someday
Like we did
here today.
Author notes
For Susan b/c her uncle passed away yesterday.
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Ah, I offer my condolences to Susan and hope your lovely poem brings comfort.
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Thank you Cara
This was just perfect. It was like he wanted to dance the way he would want us to get him in and out of bed and he would put his head on our shoulder and his arms around our waist. Thank you for being such a loving friend.
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excellent~
I thought about me and my name being Susan....
This is beautiful.....and truly a heartfelt poem...and a beautiful tribute....
Best of luck in the contest...
I am sure they will dance again together one day
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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Very tender and full of heartfelt feelings.
Well Done
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This poem was heart-rending but the 3rd and final stanzas really put a lump in my throat. It was a beautiful gesture to write this for your friend. I hope it helped her feel a little better.
Mark
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Parting is heartbreaking but we all have to deal with this at some time inour lives. This little poem may well make it just a little easier. Very well done.
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Bravo!
Great dedication to this person's uncle, cuz. Beautiful words here. Good job.
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Thank you cara
This is so sweet and great, I love this and will cherrish it all ways I will add it to my list asap. It is perfect as when we were in the hospitial and he would want out of the bed inorder for him to stand we would have to hold him up, so I would say we were dancing, it is perfect and a fond memory incorparted in this that I will cherrish always. Thank you
Love Susan
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A great write for Susan and her mom--Very thoughtful of you and I know it will be appreciated by them in this time of sadness --- Well Done!
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Ohhhhhhhhhh Cara how beautiful ~ she will love it
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This is a very nicely written poem Cara and I'm sure that all the people involved in this loss will love to see it. You take care now...
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Nice write, sentimental and nostalgic. And romantic
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