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Pulse

Willingly enthralled
in an exquisite exchange
Ivory nip, pure and innocent
rush desires found in crimson
I sup of this cradle
the elixir of life
A promise of sophistication
immersed in delicate fragrance

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 23

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    Beautiful
    Your words etched here are wonderful and inspiring
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes to you
    Julie



  • maralisa silver member
    July 18

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    A promise of sophistication immersed in delicate fragrance wow wonderful take on the promt good luck in tne contest


  • thepoetssoul gold member
    July 17

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    Tis a most exellent piece of poetryThe imagery is wonderfully vivid in splendid colour and tasteTruly a brilliant poem you have written.A true joy to have read.Best of wishes to you.

    Tony