sizzling steaks on the barbie
sunshine over head
silent whispers floating
soft and carefree laughter
sparking coal in the fire
informal simplicity gathering
a soft breezes whirling
special kind of event
sincere good hardy wishes
snippets of coriander and basil
snuggled married couples
snapshots of memories
Author notes
Sizzling, sunshine, silent,soft
sparking, simplicity, soft,special, sincere, snippets, snuggled,
snapshots.
A contest entry
- ~ Summer Word Bank ~ by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended July 27, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Each line feels like a glimpse into a different memory of feeling of the summer, although when reading the entire poem they all fit together to give the single memory depth.
Well penned.
~lost
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This had a great flow and story within the words from the word bank, gives a soft feeling. well done and thanks for joining in.
Warm thoughts.
Frozentearz -
Sounds like the perfect day for giving thanks! A breath of fresh air. Thanks for this entry and best wishes,
Frogz~ -
Ho how we miss all those beautiful summer days here in rainy Britain!!! Well done and good luck in the contest. Val
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ah yes the picture of lovely summer time outings, nice poem for her word bank, thank you for sharing good luck
Lin
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