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Dream too simple a bit

I met the man recently who said to me

That my dream is very simple one

Yes I think it is

But why to complicate things?

Is it not better to keep free space

Between me and you

For more art and love?

And what to wish more

If we have each other?

And we learn each day

How to make this simple case

More beautiful and real?

What more to dream about

Should I

And why?

Please tell me what you think

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 4

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    So simple yet so much deep poetry of the situations of the lovers..The flow is very much passionate and warm ..well done...

  • scoff
    August 9, 2008

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    Simple dreams are the best dreams.

    Give me one good, simple dream to rest my head on, and I would be very happy. Like you say, "why complicate things?"


  • individuality gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry, dreams do not have top be complicated, simple ones suffice if they are on the right track anna