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The parts of you I love the most

I love your tongue and fingers the most I think

Oh and your voice

When you are saying all these sweet sexy things to me

Yes I love it

Of course I love your cock too

It’s really cute one

It’s just that your tongue and fingers

Oh and this gorgeous voice of yours

Were first

So I love them

The most I think

Though yes it’s hard to choose

What part of you is the sweetest one

I know

But this tongue penetrating me oh

And these fingers of yours

And the way you play with me by them

Oh and then all what you say

And your look

God how I miss this all

Right now...

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  • Bruce silver member
    March 24

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    This is well written! You are able to maintain an innocence demeanor in your writing despite the frank sensuality. Well done.


  • IronMaiden1236
    July 20, 2008
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    good, like the conversation cadence...


  • individuality gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    a good piece of poetry which flows smoothly, i think of leonard cohen when you say the voice, after a million cigs his voice goes deeper than any tongue