Who knows of myths?
He who dares
Who brings the gifts?
He who cares
Tattered wings and a broken heart,
Torn are the roots and taken apart;
ripped out from where the seems start,
A fallen fairy or a question mark?
So many light quizzes but thier answers; dark,
Tattered are my wings and broken is my heart.
Author notes
It's like how society take away our freedom, that's how a fairy might feel if thier wings were taken away...so its the proverbial WINGS that represent freedom, as they are the fairy's only means of freedom...thats my take on this...well...whatever...
A contest entry
- Paying it forward by Entwining Beauty.
300 points, ended July 22, 2008, 4 entries
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Comments
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This was a really good piece! It's been a while since I've read something from you, but I still enjoyed it!
Thanks much for sharing..
Angel
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I really liked this poem pet, speaks a lot of truths with beautiful imagery
well done
lisa...xxoxoxo!!
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your spit makes me drip with longing for more... keep uo the fine work...
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Society will indeed try to do that to you.. like how you've based your poem metaphorically around the subject!!
I'm fascinated to find out if you meant to use the word "seems" because it's rather clever if you did... because it holds a lot of questioning. Or perhaps you mean seams as in the binding of things...
Think this poem fits the picture excellently!
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dude sweet, i usually don't like rhyme btw i agree with your A.N. but freedom is a word not a truth
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This is a good poem good luck
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I don't know if rhyme fits in this kind of contest, but nevertheless, this is good... a little different from what I'm used to reading by you. Good luck on the contest.
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