What a tangled web we weave when
we first learn to decieve.
i could see it clear as day
but chose to go through it anyway.
Now its intricatly knotted
amoungst my hair
I tug at it, trying not to care
But it's distored my perception
its ruined my whole day
I look back now wishing i had gone another way.
So many nights in awe i sat
watching you weave your deadly trap.
and now as i sit amougst it
i smile
i saw it coming, i must admit.
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You know when you overhear a comment and you just have a feeling its about you. We'll this should have the same effect.
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I felt that the last stanza came off as awkward, and didn't go with the flow of the other two stanzas. And "distored" should be distorted (or destroyed??)
I loved "But it's distored my perception its ruined my whole day I look back now wishing i had gone another way." Nice strong word use there. =D
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