Gazing upon marble skies,
restlessness fills my soul.
Nature's freedom tugs at my heartstrings,
a caged bird longing for escape.
Soaring altitudes of discovery,
adventures bud deep within
midnight's imagination
as its hour ticks away.
Author notes
Option #2
A contest entry
- Early Morning Dark Quickie!!! by Sweet Impatience.
900 points, ended July 18, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is just like how I feel like this a lot. I can relate to this in many ways. it hits close to home for me.
excellent take on the prompt.
good luck
kat
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"Gazing upon marble skies"
Awesome-est opening line ever, there's something about marble skies its inexplainable
Fab write!
Keep up the good work! 
Peace
Anansey
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Thank you for the wonderful comment
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Excellent!! Oh my.. I can relate to this write... the feeling in it is so beautifully done!
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this is such a lovely poem for the picture i love the last two lines, its so lovely yet errie and lonely.
keep writing and good luck,stephanie ♥
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Good take on the picture--You write "Dark" so well--
I envy that talent---Everything I write is in rhyme and It, in most cases doesn't carry the impact of a good free write---
Well Done & Best of Luck in the Contest! :
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good luck to you as well
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