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Table set for two
poetic voices coo
good vibrations twine
in-between the wine.
Amorous petals unfurl
fragrant blossoms bloom
as two become one creating
delicate  bonds of harmony.

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    Aww this is so beautiful
    Subtle tones indeed blended together.
    Pretty words
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie


  • penman gold member
    July 21, 2008
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    Excellent

    Very touching and so well expressed. such a beautiful write. Best of luck in the contest.


  • DolphinLass silver member
    July 19, 2008
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    very well written and nice background too


  • J Kard
    July 18, 2008
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    nicely put

    i liked that. lovely picture. good luck on winning your contest


  • DreamerOfTheStars
    July 18, 2008
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    awww I like it you can rhyme...unlike me...best of luck!!!


  • The Poetic Angel
    July 17, 2008
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    wow maralisa this is fantastik i love the pix

    good luck in contest

    x judie x


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    July 17, 2008

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    i like this alot,
    its very very beautiful,
    she should like this, best of luck,
    all my love,
    kitty xx


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 17, 2008

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    I think Julie will like this--I like the touch of rhyme within this piece--
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the Contest! :

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