Harmony moves through
Sorrows notes...
Curvaceous tears fold
Down the wings of broken hearts
Symphony..
Loves terrain painted with
passions sighs..
Spinning circles
'round Sister Moon,
your memories
float upon crows wings..
Hide in Shame of loves
Majesty
Author notes
10 Poets
20 - 40 words
35 Minutes
I used all three options..
A contest entry
- Early Morning Dark Quickie!!! by Sensual Angel.
900 points, ended July 18, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Loved the picture. Thought the poem was interesting too.
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Again another perfect write so much defined by it's pic. Nicely done.
Nevadapoet
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Wow, how beautiful is that! This really touched me.
Congrats on the very well deserved shiny!
Slayer
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Thank you hun! I'm glad that you liked it!
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How wonderful...lovely word choice and metaphor to deep meaning...you are on a strong roll of the depth of love and life...congrat's on the Silver...well done.
Love to you, sweet soul.
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What a beautiful image... I love the emotion in this... (Should have been gold!)
Well done, dear...
Ken
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I think that this poem is simply a beautiful masterpiece. I really love the last 2 lines. I love the fact that you used all three options. the imagery is brilliant and exceptionally vivid.
good luck
kat
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this is literally da bestest thing i evar readed. i is in complete shock and awes of this masterpeeces. your the best poet in the world.
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and you are full of
lol..
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Just beautiful sis!! Love the imagery. You are going from strength to strength with your writing!
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Just beautiful and I love the pic too Love, C
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I'm glad that you liked it
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aww wow, this was wonderful *hugs* hehehe all three, and nicely done, keep writting and take care
good luck, stepahnie ♥
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Beautifully written ~ best of luck hun
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thank you very much..
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Get writing already lol
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You know you had a good laugh!!!
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Hrmmmmmm. lol
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hmmmm.....so you are here.....
is that because the picture is like you?
hehehehe....seems liek we will have a fiesty morning, you and I
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weird and unusual? hmm.. I'm pretty sure it is..Lol.
WAR!!
grr!!! lol.. shit..Lol..
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look stop calling yourself shit, it will be okay, that stuff will wash off you someday
hahahahaha
let the war begin
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really? I could have sworn it was coming from your direction.. And I'm downwind of you! (meh I'm so sleepy Lol)
haha.. Yay
grr!!
lol.
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hehehehe...at leats i have a direction that straight
lol
hehehe
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Lol.. really? then why were you wandering around in cicrles a few minutes ago? lol..
grrrrr...lol.
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a cricle is a curved striagt line
hehehe some might look upo your crookedness for the answers
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Haha.. very good!!! very good!!! lol.
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I leanr from the best (myself)
hahahahaha, thats what listening to the voices gets you
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really? I thought it got you a strait jacket with some pretty pink bows.. Lol..
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get those damn pink bows off now!
*throws a temper tantrum till the guards change the bows to blue*
thats better
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And thats why they call you weird Lol....
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nothing weird about not wanting pink bows
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