Awaking again
lost in fear, gripped with pain,
he drags
his withered body to the stream
but it wasn't a dream
too distraught
for
fragments of thought
he clings to
that thing
the ring
The stream reflects
the wreck;
the sad, solemn
hideous Gollum...
"I sits here
on the hard dirt floor;
I's not one of them
hobbitsiz
no more."
Author notes
'l love Gollum'
Picture from the motion picture, 'Lord of the Rings'.
A contest entry
- The Lord of the Rings - Gollum's grief by Dreamana.
600 points, ended August 1, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Although short, this does make me feel for the poor wretch. Its hard to imagine his suffering.
Thank you for your entry. -
It is a sad situation. Poor Smeagol turned Gollum.
Good luck in the contest.
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