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Once again

Its a cycle.
A really stupid one.
I think this is the fourth time
And if I'm not mistaken
I'll almost be through
It was almost worth it.
Almost.

Its a cycle.
You get sucked in
And spat out again.
It looked good at first.
But things changed
Once again.

Its a cycle,
Never ending.

Its a game.
And I lose every time.

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  • stylization
    July 19, 2008

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    oh im sorry. have you fallen again? it'll get better & easier. kays? (lovely poem, btw. great imagery, i could hear you speaking. love the ending.)


  • Chanson belle
    July 17, 2008

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    aw i can't say i know how u feel cuz u seem to be the one always caught in this cycle, and not be, ut we'rehere for you and sometime the cycle will end adn you'll be happy with the result


  • youhadme-athello.
    July 17, 2008
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    aw i'm sorry ruh =/
    i'm sure next time will be better.
    just remember that we are all here for you <3
    and that we love you more than bunnies.

    i know how you feel though, and it helps to have people you love you with you.


    • AnonymousXO
      July 17, 2008
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      eh i havent fallen yet maybe this time will be different. idk =[