you fill me with and love
you phase me with words that warm my heart
we walk the sunset beach
you make me laugh
you make me feel tender in your arm
sayin "you love me"
and i fell in your arm like butterfly
i look into your brown eyes
you look in to mine
the fustraion i have inside of me
you kissed me so tender
i love you for ever till i die
to death do us apart
A contest entry
- I love you... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 27, 2008, 16 entries
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Very nice
In giving of oneself one must be netrothed to the one they will spend the rest of their life with or that love will be tarnished for it was not sea;led with faith . Heartbreak and tears and the feeling of an empty embrace can never truly be healed
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At tenderful heart and softness is flowing in the words..I love it.....well done and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece...
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