Two Roses...
One red and the other white..
Can you choose the most beautiful?
Both signify feelings of love
The white...purity and innocence.
The red...Deep passion.
Can the red become white?
Can the white become red?
For me it would be hard to choose
But I'll take the red.
For the red rose
Can change to white...
When one takes the vows to wed...
For Love is already pure white
But the red rose makes the white
Become more beautiful!
To feel the red rose's beauty,
The secret is Love!
The red rose is prettier to me
Than even diamonds...
For diamonds fade in brilliance over time
but
True love reigns and lives on forever...
for
That is all you take to your grave...
Love and treasured memories!
dragonheart1
Author notes
This is not a romance tale but the definiton of the two roses. You can write any fairy tale you wish with either color...
A contest entry
- Taste of Romance by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
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The two roses blended together in such beauty as are your words penned here.
I loved this poem
Spoke to me in deep emotions and feelings
Thank you for your entry and best wishes
Julie
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beautiful I truly love this. great job.
best of luck
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PERFECT
Hello Beautiful Friend
I hope this message greets you with a happy heart.
Sweet soul, you have penned a most beautiful poem here.
Your words wrapped around my heart like a blanket of love,
warming my soul.
Your descriptions of the roses, are awesome.
You wrote... Both signify feelings of love.
The white...purity and innocence.
The red...Deep passion.I look at it this way,
When we first fall in love with someone, that love is pure and innocent. Like the peck on the cheek when saying goodnight after a date, instead of giving into the kisses of deep passion.
With time that love that was pure and innocent, becomes more deeper as feelings of passion and yearnings arise within the relationship.
The white rose slowly changes its colour from white to pink ,as new emotions of desire developes within the relationship, as time goes by, that pink rose slowely deepens in colour, turning from pink into red as the passion deepens even more and love takes on new meanings, as the hearts of lovers become one, finally sharing in passions desires.
This is how I view the rose.
A beautiful write my sweet friend.Your words have come from deep within your heart,and the reader can feel this.
It has been a pleasure reading you and thank you for sharing your heart with us.
Blessings of love and happiness I send to you.
your angel friend of poetry *angel*
~Angel of Whispers~
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Ah, the red rose of passion and the white of innocence ^^
I think I'll stay with the white rose for a while, then I can dye it when I get older
Woo; spell check:
5- inocense = innocence
9 - woud - would
last line - treasued = treasured
memrories - memories
Once again this is beautifully written
Good luck with your entry ^^
Claire x
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wow very well expressed ...good luck
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Thew white...purity and inocense.The red...Deep passion.For Love is already pure white But the red rose makes the white True love reigns and lives on forever.a beautiful poem good luck in the contest
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