she made the choices
she did this willing
with open eyes
and still beating heart
shrugged off the past
took the hand of darkness
welcomed him in
and gave her heart
she sacrificed her soul
for a pieces of happiness
his slice of love
and caressing hand
she made a vow
one pledged in blood
unbreakable
compellingly binding
the blood is life
she devour's and feeds
her sire watches
the night now bleeds
Author notes
Credit: Le_Vampyre_En_Soie
A contest entry
- Best AP Poet Contest by davidbetzer.
1500 points, ended August 2, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Vampire Poems! by hazeleyedfreak.
600 points, ended August 30, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark Picture Prompt... by Angelflower.
600 points, ended July 30, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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You did a really good job.. I like the feel of this piece. very vampiric..
thank you very much for sharing!! I really enjoyed reading this! best of luck!
Ange
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Whoa
This screams vampire. This is an awesome piece and I really enjoyed reading it!!! Thank you for entering and Good Luck!! -
Thats what a vampire is all about, stunning finish..
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wow
i didnt realizes we had such an expert on the site....my first impressions after reading some of the comments you left.... were that you were just another over achiver.....in the makings asshole.....my bad -
As to your poetic talent, we may perhaps name it "no going forward" I would stop now--even if you were given the 'dark gift,' It wouldn't be the gift of eloquence, something which all of time might not remedy.
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