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A gift in Surprise?



I killed her for self-gain...
                    and she thanked me for it.








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I hope you like it

In a list

A contest entry

Anywho, tell me what you think...

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Comments

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    October 25, 2008

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    Some people are just asking for it Great line, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.


    whisper

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 16, 2008

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    This is rather an interesting one liner good luck to you in the contest with it best wishes always be well

  • WritingWretch silver member
    August 16, 2008

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    I took your prompt. I liked it so much I quoted it twice in the poem but it was complex and difficult to come to a coherent theme. I hope you like my effort's outcome. I wonder what you had in mine. April


  • queens1
    July 21, 2008
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    I would be very interested in reading the poem that this prompts.
    Patty


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 18, 2008

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    i like this alot hehehehe
    i'd thank you too

    good luck in the contest and take care
    stephanie ♥

  • MortalPhoenix
    July 17, 2008
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    Hm... interesting. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!

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