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lets do it again

do you remember
can you still feel it

does your passion still burn

am i still in your heart

do i still touch you
can i set you on flames

is it still there
the love between us

the burning desire
to caress and to hold

if i kiss you will you respond

twirl your tongue around mine

have we lost it
it seem's faded

not as strong or as deep

 

can we save it, do you want to

 

try again, do it over

begin again from the start 

 

can we do that, are we able

will we give each other that chances

 

see the person the one we care for

let our self fall in love all over again

 

 

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    Aww
    Such a touching poem, of love was ,to love re found, and, rekindled.
    Beautifully sad...
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie


  • maralisa silver member
    July 18, 2008

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    see the person the one we care for let our self fall in love all over again a very deep poem good luck in the contest