Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

When...

When I'm Around You My Heart Beats Like A Steel Drum With A Fast Rhythm
When I Think Of You My Body My Soul My Being Is Floating On Cloud Nine
When I Lay Eyes On You I Melt Into Where I Am At the Moment I Get Lost In Your Eyes
When I'm Feeling Your body heat I feel as though every part of my body has been frozen and your my heat warming me up inside and warming the rest of me with it
When You Say You Love Me I Lose My Breath And for a moment no one exists but you and I and I swear for a moment  my life makes sense and nobody else matters to me
When Other People hug you or touch you I loathe it because they have gotten the most beautiful thing in their arms and it's like they have my whole word in their arms
when your gone my withdrawals make me crazy and my thoughts consists of you
People say I'm crazy for being so in love but I say that their crazy that they aren't in love and don't see you for what you are the most beautiful thing ever and my oxygen my everything

Author notes

Well this poem was about my girlfriend lol but sadly I couldn't really capture the essence of my love for her lol I tried though!

A contest entry

What Do You Think Of This

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression? Line numbers
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?) (Line numbers)

Comments

  • this made my heart smile.

    you should share this with her if you haven't dear. it is beautiful and lovely. it filled my heart with an unexpressed gladness that you used your free space for a love profession. very romantic. very sweet.

    your imagery is delicate and honest. it made me sigh a little.

    very nicely done. best wishes.