greatness blows
50 candles
of a century
in this common world
it is your insanity
that keeps my madness
from strikes too hard
and I wish your brightness
never stops to light
the dark corners of my world
with 50 candles you can
for a year long help me from stumble
when I step into the penumbra of bad days
50 wishes
at the end of the song
happy birthday
Author notes
HAPPY BIRTHDAY Mayne!!!
Thank you for all those years of friendship
and understanding, never asking for anything back.
More birthday messages and new clothes...
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4429356
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Wow~
Gosh Girly You have been busy and how did I miss so many
Oy!!!!
I must have been on the moon
Happy Birthday to Your Friend
You are so Precious!!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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excellent~
What a great poem you have penned for your friend here sis...
Now 50 candles that's a lot to blow out and make a wish on...
Hope it's not the trick candles..that stay lit after you blow on them
Hugs
Susan~~~
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50 candles that's a lot of candles to light...but is sure is nice to have 50 candles light around...would love that certain glow and warmth
yeah he sure has enlighten us with this certain feeling
and aha this is for Sir Yem
hola Sir Yem
Happy Birthday!
thank you for making me smile,laugh err guffaw lol, i have learn so many things from you.
Mari sorry...lol
I guess I shaould've leave this msg on his page...hehe
I hope he gets to read this
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A fine piece with a message that comes shouting through. Great
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fifty candles is a milestone in life,but when people care about us...it is a much greater milestone, one we get to keep always... very lovely verses ...PK
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This is such a beautiful poem, Mari... so representitive of what special friends you and Yem are to each other
Dee
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Beautiful
What a lovely poem and how fortunate Yem is to have a friend like you...Glad I stopped by and wish that I could read your poetry in your native language...
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Every person shud have atleast one such friendship! Lovely poem Mari.. Yem's as lucky as you
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beautiful, Mari!
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A sweet way to say Happy Birthday to someone special. I think I still have the Moxie I gave Yem for his B'day a couple of years ago. Great write. Pen on...
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More orangey hues to shine around
the birthday man, the one and only Mayne!
Perfect words, Mariza.
M-C -
Old Blackarse Jack and the pirate fleet
expect that Yem's by now replete
with all the cakes and goodies sweet
that go to make his birthday treat.
I've forgotten what I meant to say
and it's my bedtime anyway.
I'm sorry that I cannot stay
but I hope Yem's had a happy day.
Love to you both and applause for your words and to Yem for inspiring them. Goodnight sweet friends.
Love and hugs, el padre.
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Ah, this will be your least read poem of the year! lol
Thank you, you make me almost cry, a hard thing to do to someone who is both cynical and unsentimental.
I do try to make you smile when you are blue, and I also try to find a safe hiding place when "IT" is on the loose. The art is in deflecting her wrath onto someone else!
Ah, the beautiful orange background! That makes me thirsty...or makes me feel like sending a return email about favorite fruit.
Thank you madam, you are a cherished friend. Write me another one!
(they need a moon emoticon)
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The background colour worked!!!
Feliz Aniversário!!!
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It's so nice to be remembered on your birthday isn't it? Well done my friend.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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