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Razor Licks

Missing image

Razors lick

porcelain cheeks;

sending crimson

lies to coat her

sweet

Butterfly

lips so in forever

they'll be

tainted and black

so truth

would never be

r e v e a l e d

Author notes

Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit:
http://ahmed101.deviantart.com/art/bleeding-butterfly-75928654

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A contest entry

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    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression? • Line numbers
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Comments

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  • Desire gold member
    July 26

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    Holy Moly~

    Oy Beautiful this is one Powerful piece and what images You have brought forth
    ~Wowzers~
    Love how You presented this and the picture is wicked
    Excellent take on it for sure

    Congratulations on Your HM!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • IrishGypsyRose silver member
    July 20

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    Awesomely Done

    I love the pic first off. The wording is fabulous...Razor licks...damn that is powerful in itself...the rest just slams it home. Great write. ~mandie~

  • UnityHope gold member
    July 20

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    that picture seriously fucking scared me
    ima go hide under the covers now
    Great write babydoll
    ♥ dani


  • Valley Girl silver member
    July 20

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    Wow hun! The imagery you have used for this is phenomenal! You have really captured the picture! The reader can really feel the emotions and the pain with in this write. Congrats on the HM twin! (hugs) ♥


  • Forever--x
    July 18

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    This poem is so beautifully written.

    Thankyou for entering and best of luck.

    Keira
    --- blackwood.baby

  • Cassandra Reign
    July 18
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    ^^ that picture is gorgeous

  • Forever--x
    July 17
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    Here's your picture:

    http://ahmed101.deviantart.com/art/bleeding-butterfly-75928654
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