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A Birds

All the world is full of people,
All the people full of woe,
Full of envy,
full of jealous thoughts.
All the forests full of birds,
All the birds are full of love,
Full of merry notes.
I wish I was a bird.

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    March 7

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    Thought-provoking...

    Thank you for sharing your muse's work with all of us. I sometimes wish I were a bird, as well... to be free and not have to worry about tomorrow.

  • Anybodys-guess
    September 3, 2008

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    Yeah, haven't we all felt like that from time to time? Fly away singing and the hell with the rest of the world?...Well, I have, from time to time. I like the sentiment here, man. Later, AG


  • hamid
    July 17, 2008
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    Nice

    its really a simple but nice poem, but you has't concentrate on the rhyme, its just an open poem, may be you have your own style of poetry, but if you concentrate on rhymes it will really be a fantastic poem, becouse it have a very nice and real theme, and the idea, Good Work Poet