Upon nights of warm splendor
gold reflects dreams you induce
warping,twisting minds
into an internal fog
of delusions...
euphony dances insane
rhythms of brilliant melodies
Reaching for fixations..
sighing upon withered lips..
My Fix,
Your Breath
My life...
Author notes
20-40 words
30 minutes to write
Prompt # 1: Illumination by bitchinblack
Prompt # 2: Lyrics by Pink:
I can’t stay on your life support
There’s a shortage in the switch
I can’t stay on your morphine
Cause it’s making me itch
(I had to do that one... it's gotta be my anthem or something )
Muse is dead!!!! *kicks it* meh..
A contest entry
- Quickie by Request by kiwigirljacks.
525 points, ended July 17, 7 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A definate trophy winner...I love your style...thanks for sharing it with us.
Nevadapoet
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Thank you very much.. I'm glad that you liked it
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How beautiful!!! I love the ending...this is truly Golden even with a greenie by it...lol
amazing and lovely once again...
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this is amazing, i love it,
congrats on the hm you really deserve it,
all my love,
kitty xxx
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WOW
Wonderful word wizardry displayed throughout my friend!
I have to say this is a top ten favorite of mine(til you blow me away again! l.o.l.)
also I'd say looks to me like a gold winner!
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Lol.. a few colors off me thinks
.. But I'm glad that you liked it!!!!
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A tranquilizing smoothness about it all...
"gold reflects dreams"
..highlighting the path..
"euphony dances insane
rhythms of brilliant melodies"
..such poignant..
and the ending was just so surreal. A great take on the prompt here!
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Yay for a dead muse then! This rocks big time...awesome write hunni. 'sighing upon withered lips..'--wow! And the ending really has impact. Superbly penned, good luck
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thanks! I'm glad that you liked it so much!!
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Wonderful imagery and emotion blending seamlessly the two prompts. Great job Angel. This is wow!!
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wow my butt! lol.. it's a meh.. lol..
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Muse isn't dead at all!! This is great!! You combined the two prompts so well here.. not easy to do!! Excellent!
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Powerful words through out this amazing poem
My fix, your breath, my life.. what an ending
Good luck in the contest hun
Julie
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A most incredible job and kudo's for combining pronpts, that is one of my fav things to do too!! You did an amazing job....Best wishes
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Teehee..poetic minds think alike, combining prompts =D
"gold reflects dreams you induce"
I LOVE THIS. Dreaming stuff in gold...=P Dreaming OF gold...heh.
"internal fog of delusions"
Awesome and pretty.
"euphony dances insane"
Euphony--that's one helluva word!
You know...I think you totally kicked my ass with this. Good luck!!
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I know.. I like that word.. but it makes my brain hurt..
lol..
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=P All the good words have that effect...
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meh. I'm not using them again!!! lol.
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I don't think your muse is dead....this is excellent!
I agree with AngelWithDarkWings your muse has a better chance then ours...
Good luck...although I don't think you'll need much.. -
For some reason love your muse sounds senual. Such a great take with your words too! Best of luck love!
~Ksytal Angel
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Sissy, this is excellent.. I absolutely love it so much..
though I think that there is a typo. MyFix = My Fix you need a space.
I love the last 3 lines the most ...
Your muse seems to be in far better shape than mine..
good luck
kat
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