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liars

liars live for the buyers
they trick and tease
So they can do as they please
They can bend peoples emotions
as easy as druging them with a potion
They can be stupid or smart
As skilled as hitting a bulls-eye with a dart
tangling within a web of lies
unable to hear their own cries
Coming as any form
As dangerous as a deathly storm
but eventually, they do fall
unable to even crawl
Everything comes crashing down
Wishing that,in their bones, they were'nt bound
All of the truth has been lost
Every ounce of intellegence has been tossed
It's truley an addiction,
When everything is fiction
the need to hide,
to use a disguise
You cant trust but you must
They never die
As long as you buy

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  • BrokenXxXDreams
    August 19

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    Wow, wonderful again!! You managed to keep to the subject and at the same time even use rhyme!! Excellent Job. I love it, it's very creative!

    Favourite lines:

    "They can bend peoples emotions
    as easy as druging them with a potion"
    andddddd
    "They can be stupid or smart
    As skilled as hitting a bulls-eye with a dart"

    Awesome Indeed!!


  • time for change ---
    July 20

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    Nicely done.. :]
    I have to say.. I don't enjoy it when I get lied to. Sometimes when I feel them fibbing, it makes me angrier than anything that they'd think I'd fall for it.

    And most of what you expressed here is true..

    Sometimes though, when I bend the truth.. I do get in a lot of trouble. And with one lie.. comes more.. and then soon I can't get out of what I've done.

    "but eventually, they do fall
    unable to even crawl
    Everything comes crashing down"

    This was very good... got me to reflect on a few things.