Igniting that fire
How erotic and free.
Crushes; with the cupid
Coaxed intimate deeds?
Tossing with the inflamed
Thrusting rears 1-onto-2,
Pushed driving enticing tease
Raptures; who takes a toiled lead.
Held together in creative feels
Enlightenment in both eyes
Passions within your yield
O! Solace, release, you win.
A contest entry
- Give it to me! by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended August 1, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hood-Winked!
I really liked the ending lines to this poem - they were beautifully done - I wish you the best in the contest too
I like that you have an interesting rhyme scheme here - not enough to be overly traditional, but enough to create a nice rhythm
Keep writing
Polly
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