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J'espere

J'espere je pouvoir chanter.
(I wish I could sing)

J'espere je pouvoir voler.
(I wish I could fly)

J'espere je pouvoir faire n'importe quoi.
(I wish I could do anything)

Mais,
(but)

Je ne pouvoir pas.
(I can not)

Je suis desole.
(I am sorry)

Au revoir,
(good bye)

Toujours.
(forever)

Author notes

my french poem, it's probably very bad french, gotta love that. In paranthese I put down pretty much what it would mean in english. I am very bad at french, but know enough, I am 13, so bleh. enjoy

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  • nunchaks
    November 4

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    Bon français. Vous avez bien représentés. Grande poème. Parce qu'il était en français, je me suis senti dans une autre voie.

  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 19

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    This is awesome

    I hope you get to where you learn all those languages and by the time you are grown you will truly shine above all

  • luv2dream gold member
    July 19

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    thank you for this..beautiful and even more by using French..I have a small obsession with anything French..took it years ago..Thanks!!


  • Walls-within
    July 18

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    A very good poem. A french poem, lol. Good thing there were translations, I would have been rather lost. It is very well written, and it flows very nicely. Congratz on your trophy!
    ~W.W~

  • plainoljoe
    July 18
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    ah mon petite, everything is possible if you just believe in your dreams

    Joe


  • black hearted rebel
    July 17

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    Ohhhh adore le francais...c'est tres tres beau(i love french...it's very very beautiful)this was a wonderful piece!


  • 2lullabyhaven gold member
    July 17
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    Wow, I love it, and at your age; wow congrats on your trophy lol


  • HolyMan28
    July 17
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    This isn't bad.. but I wasn't looking for translations! I could care less what it means, I'm only judging the flow.

    Good work. It flows nicely once I copied and pasted the french parts into notepad. I enjoy simplicity, as I believe it flows well.

    Good job.

    • xXDarkChildXx
      July 17
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      The reason for translations is because my friends don't speak french, only reason. And I like being nice to the people who don't know french. But, thanks for the trophy.
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