Would they have survived longer outside?
Water’s gone all cloudy and gray
Leaves have turned dry to a crisp
Flower heads have wilted
Stems now take a bow
Cut flowers dead
In dusty
Vases
Why?
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Nonet
A nonet has nine lines. The first line has nine syllables, the second line eight syllables, the third line
seven syllables, etc... until line nine that finishes withone syllable. It can be on any subject and
rhyming is optional.
line 1 - 9 syllables
line 2 - 8 syllables
line 3 - 7 syllables
line 4 - 6 syllables
line 5 - 5 syllables
line 6 - 4 syllables
line 7 - 3 syllables
line 8 - 2 syllables
line 9 - 1 syllable
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Wow Judie, this is a really thoughtful poem. We cut those flowers purely so our homes will look nice inside. But we should go walking outside and see their beauty where it s really the best.
Thanks for shaing and good nonet hun
Gaylene
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Thanks Mum
yes we shud and i dont use many cut flowers but i guess cut flowers are good for those unable to go outside for themself and they cheer up so many old or lonly people ...
xxx judie xxx
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The hidden sacrifice behind a vase of cut flowers, they gave their life to please the eye.
Not going to comment on the form as I haven't met it yet.
YLD
Jem xxxx
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How about doing a reflection so you do the nonet then in reverse
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Thinks lol ok X
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thankYou Jems
i love flowers in a vase in the home they do look so pretty and smell so nice but prefer to watch them grow and live outside...
the form is one of the easyest i have done i mite combine it with another to challange meself one day
xxx Your angel xxx
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