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Reason

Missing image

Sitting alone listening

to trees still breeze

Spoken promises wither

as the heart overrides reason

Author notes

Prompt: Picture
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Song Line: But my heart won't lie - from Jocelyn Enriquez - Do You Miss Me
Picture Credit: Photobucket
Hope it's OK I did two.

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  • penman gold member
    August 6
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    Wonderful

    A great creation for the contest. Congratulations for the honorable mention


  • Desire gold member
    July 20

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Reason
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Love the second line: ...trees still breeze and Spoken promises wither For some reason I was seeing a tiny sign of leave emerging from the cracked earth from a cherry blossom seed and then a huge foot stomp it to the ground
    Strange as it may sound I'm seeing umbrellas twirling- but being shown from the top of the umbrella down- whether metaphor or symbolism~
    Hopefully that makes some sense
    Excellent take on the prompt~
    Powerful images You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • TyrannyForestFairy
    July 17

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    Lovely poem. Brief but deep. Great terminology and concept, beautiful picture and background to accompany it. Great poem, I loved it!

    ~Emily~ xx


  • Valley Girl gold member
    July 17

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    Beautiful write hun! Lovely background. I really like the nature feel to this write. Best of luck in your contest. ♥