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Walking in Dreams

Swirling stardust,
coats our feet,
as we wander through
dream's clouds.

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In this round I want you to write a sentence or just a few words to inspire. All topics welcome. The winning 15 will be the prompts used in round 2.

30 poets, no more than 15 words.

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  • Cry Little Sister
    August 17, 2008
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    whoa...


  • Hello...No.One.Home silver member
    July 18, 2008

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    I feel all floaty after reading this and I really loved the lines;

    Swirling stardust,
    coats our feet,


    Giving it a feel of a dreamland or fantasy world.

    Great work and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Rose


  • aboomer silver member
    July 17, 2008
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    I love this! So soft and dreamy - beautiful words.
    best wishes in the contest.

  • MortalPhoenix
    July 17, 2008

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    This is very interesting, could be understood in quite a few ways, and beautifully worded. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.