missing you is the blood
inside my veins,
come dance me
to the end of time,
the music of the love
you alone own,
past horizons and shadows
to the heart of the sun
and into yours
Author notes
Taking a leaf from Cerulean & Aurora
I love my Dan completely too!
http://rav777.deviantart.com/art/Dreaming-Beauty-91293004
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie? To keep me awake.... by kiwigirljacks.
525 points, ended July 17, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Amazing. Good luck in this contest. I too feel the same...I can't breathe without missing her. You've truly captured what it means to miss someone ALSO adding imagery such as the sun and shadows. Good luck in the contest, I'm sure you'll do well!
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LoL
Your AN: Oh, for crap sakes...=D LMAO, I'm used to the cheese, but I think you actually get some fun out of my stated disgust. (: Am I right?
Your poem:
"missing you is the blood inside my veins"
No it isn't!!
AHAHA, but as a metaphor, it's fabulousssssss.
"to the heart of the sun and into yours"
Poetic and simple!!
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hahaha didn't you know i have dubbed Cerulean 'Loveman' superhero of cheese!!!! Just for you to puke at every time you read one LOLOL
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Nobody tells me anything!! I didn't know until now =[
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He's able to leap hearts in a single bound
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awww
wow, and in my word...Awesomeness!!
Your love filled words, that are just always at their best, even here
Cind's
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z Cuz lol yeah I miss him soooo much when he's working hard
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Aww.. it's so precious and loving and wistful!! Beautiful take on the pic!
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awww this is really sweet and beautiful I really love this! I'm sure he will to when he reads this best of luck!!!
Angel
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This is beautifully flowing and so soft.. A wonderful take on the image!!! Best wishes in the contest dear!!!
{{I been real good I promise!
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hehehe good is no fun though lol
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Hey you saw those horns didn't ya?
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Oh my goodness, this is divine. Just beautiful.
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thanks
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this is just beautiful.. I truly love this poem that you have written.. excellent. ahhh
good luck
kat
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I like this.
Strange seeing one's name in the notes of... never mind.
haha
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hahaha, you're my hero of love poems lol well today anyway until Dan gets here
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