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Stranger to the outside world
Far from the darkness of truth
I survive
As a prisoner of my dreams

Isolated to the extent of death
Yet shamelessly enjoying this suffocation
I survive
As a slave to my needs

They have captured my mind
And conquered my soul
A part of me
Has taken me whole

I feel betrayed
I feel distraught
Me a puppet in the hands
Of my needs, of my wants

I pray for freedom
I beg for death!

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  • Neha Sharma silver member
    July 17, 2008

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    I'm not going to buy you new clothes...

    Yes.. I'm not going to buy you new clothes.. what is so negetive i your life that makes you thinkm like this???? you have such a good family and now even ur elder sis is placed!! what is their to feel sad?? buddhu ladki hai tu.. accha socha kar, sab mast hoga..
    love you
    :kiss
    bbye
    sis.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 17, 2008

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    I hear you lets talk more

    So many young people today have shut themselves off from the world for many reasons .The violence and drugs around the abuse in the homes and the feeling that no one cares anymore.The safety you feel within your own room surounded by your private dreams is the only sfe place you know of .But in the suclusion one tends to keep only one mind set there fore nothing can get better until you get out of the box .
    Oh I know of this and how as you keep the door shut tight you arent asked question you dont have to talk but its more than that .When a person shuts them selves off from the world their soul within becomes lonely and lost . You tend to think of only yourself and feeling depressed and not careingfor others ..
    Tell me what it is you like to talk about what truly interests you and I will read up on. Surely there is something .Do you have any hobbies for this helps me when I feel that way I will put all my energy in a glass etching or carving a frame I have stenciled .You write very well have you thought of publishing a book its very easy and I can help for you see to feel you must give yourself something to look forward to. You could help so many people out there with your work . Beneath your writings leave a note in your book of what made you feel this way and how you are helping yourself get past it .

    • angeldreams
      July 21, 2008
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      I actually dont know why do I do this to myself..
      Or even if it is worth sharing or not!
      Dont know when my thoughts turned that much negative and for what reason?
      I have got all the things necessary for a happy life...and then nobody gets evrything he wants!
      I am clueless what made me think this way.