Tinkerbell's once looked like me
as your peterpan's flew around the
Wonderlands we discovered.
Faded yet lingering..{memories}
the scents once created when love
loved me..
Fallen upon solid reality
tears fall from minds eyes..
Author notes
20-40 words
Credit reaming_Beauty_by_rav777
http://rav777.deviantart.com/art/Dreaming-Beauty-91293004
20 mins to write
A contest entry
- Quickie? To keep me awake.... by kiwigirljacks.
525 points, ended July 17, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Just beautiful.......and all they said too!
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It was hard to write for this one.. thats for sure..Lol.. thanks hun! I'm glad you liked it! *hugs*
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this is a lovely poem hun,
its so beautiful and dear, i love it,
its just amazing, congrats on the trophie,
all my love,
kitty xxx -
Such a light and dreamy take on the image prompt! Very well composed imagery throughout!
"the scents once created when love
loved me.."
Oh I just adored those lines... For they speak volumes to the heart. Wonderful write!
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Like the fairytale reference in the beginning and then the scents bit.. everyone has their distinct and mingled scent I find.. and it's hard to forget..
The ending is really great imagery for the chest she's lying on. Love this!
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wow this is the most deepst take on the pic, i've read in the contest SiS..brilliant in my opinion
love how use used tinkerbell and peterpan...excellent
Hope you do well
Cind's
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thank you sis
I'm glad that you liked it
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this is lovely.. I do so love this poem of yours sissy. so sad though.. I didn't know that you knew Tink personally.. I am upset that you didn't share that info with me.. darn I just ran out of pixie dust
the second stanza is the one that I can relate to.
good luck
kat
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Nice.
I wish I could fly.
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but but but I thought that you could fly already....
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Hey
all superhero's can fly lololol
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*gets up on the roof* heh
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that would be an interesting sight..Lol..
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Awwww
sniff...beautiful 
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You are on a roll! Wonderful take on the pic.
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thank you very much
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K pic is there
poem????
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It's here!!!!! lol..
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Sissy umm where is your poem?? Oh I get it, its invisible...
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It's there sissy!!!
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Good luck, sissy -
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ish done
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thanks
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Slaps ya upside the head to wake the muse
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ouchie!!! Mommy!!!!!!!
LOol
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chases muse back to angelwithdarkwings and tries to net it!!!!
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Lol.. it's good!! I'm so going to lose..Lol.
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good luck sissy..
I love you
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