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as of yet

in this hour of waiting for exhaustion to take over my mind and not just my body


i think of you and what you've done for me in my many times of need.


my life.


my love.


my ever-expanding hurt rises from your lust and anger.

do you think of my in your darkest hours?


do you think of all the things i have done for you whilst your away?


but through this hurt, theres something that i must tell you.


something you could never guess.


something that could make you leap for joy at the words.


something that could make you want to put a gun to your head at the thought.


love of my life





























































































i think i'm pregnant.

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  • ouch

    you write very well and your way of doing so is unique. lots of raw emotion and the pain mixed with love image is one i can definately relate to. i only wish there was a pregnancy involved in my situation as it would clarify the situation so quickly. tell me this isn' your life though. you seem so happy. it is a surprise to find so excruciating a pain in your words. well done poet, thank you.

    • i have written some things before that were not about my life, but only a few.. this is not one of them. thank you again